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I am writing a book that’s based off of this crazy dream I had a few months ago. I required to post the whole chapter to get some criticism on how well written/interesting it is but I hear it’s not safe to do that. …
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I’ve been working on this new novel thought (it’s probably the first I’ve followed through on) and I need to be sure it doesn’t sound too familiar. Here’s the supporting back story:Alexandree Runes has been within an orphanage all her life.Unfortunately, nobody has ever hear of Mr and Mrs. Runes and therefore…
Does this girl close to me (plz read complete description)?
I pass her on the street corner near the ghetto, she is always heavily made up, and a bit under-dressed in my opinion, but she always smiles at me and asks if I want to own a good time. She always seems a short time angry when I turn her down. Should I…
Does this guy approaching me?
We’re both taking 11th grade math (and we’re in 9th grade) together and he’s always siding beside me when we have to debate in class even when I don’t have the better argument. Once when I won a debate and a girl said wow, how’d she integer that out? he said Because Kelly is an awesome person.He’s also…
Does this innovative nouns similar to a rip-off? If so how could I loose change it?
It’s about this noted, American criminal pyschologist going to Rome, to